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[Raiden IIS - Part A]

Awesome!

Massive respect to you sir!

[Omega3D: Sneak Mission]

Great style...

... but the lack of sound is confusing

Well accomplished, though

omega3D responds:

thanx 1337 dood
http://cddrpg.tk

[Pocket Halo]

Not bad...

... but I would make the whole BG a button, so you still get a sound effect, even when you miss

You can build on this, it's pretty good.

It needs the shield as well to be true Halo!

banaalbas responds:

Ive tried that, but it didn't work @ me

[Land Bomber]

Impressive

Nice engine! I reckon you can really build on this.

shapedafly responds:

thanx

[Keep Rollin' beta...]

Not bad!

Great concept for a game!

I think the black walls should cause a game over - i.e. if you hit a wall that's it. This would be very challenging.

Good work!

[The Crimeson Scarf]

Good but flawed

You couldn't jump between carriages and sometimes when I walked off the screen the flash didn't detect it.

Otherwise, a fairly impressive game, very well drawn.

[Crapcar Racing]

Good work!

I'm quite impressed by this

Your scripting is pretty good, I like how you'd got the cars to be behind/infront of each other as appropriate to their location in the theoretical depth field

Well done!

ouandyoi responds:

Thanks. :)
i never use the hitTest() function. this is all done by nesting several if...else statements.

[Fisher the Penguin]

Very nice!

Engine is smooth, well done!

[Egg Attack 2 Shooter Game]

Nice shooter!

Great joerb!

[pocket bike racing]

GAAAH! Another one!

Yet another game based on that shooter tutorial!
I don't mean to sound harsh, it's just that I've seen about a million of these clones

Well, at least you've got some imagination - with a bit of work this could be a really good game! That shooter tutorial is very limited; learn some more action scripting and build on what you've got!

Don't give up!

jinklin responds:

i know what you mean. ive seen at least 10 of them. 2 of those being mine.