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[Analog Pussy]

Awesome!

Only one thing sucks - you can't skip the intro! Other than that, this is a terrific acheivement - VERY WELL DONE

Gremlin9 responds:

Yes you can, turn storymode off in the options menu.

[Zombie killer]

OK...

Quite good, but it's hard to see where you're aiming. If you leave a cursor on the screen, it will work much better IMO.

FelleAndersson responds:

I tried to make a cursor. But it got SOOOOO fucked up. So I left it;)

[Omega3D: Sneak Mission]

Great style...

... but the lack of sound is confusing

Well accomplished, though

omega3D responds:

thanx 1337 dood
http://cddrpg.tk

[Pocket Halo]

Not bad...

... but I would make the whole BG a button, so you still get a sound effect, even when you miss

You can build on this, it's pretty good.

It needs the shield as well to be true Halo!

banaalbas responds:

Ive tried that, but it didn't work @ me

[Land Bomber]

Impressive

Nice engine! I reckon you can really build on this.

shapedafly responds:

thanx

[Crapcar Racing]

Good work!

I'm quite impressed by this

Your scripting is pretty good, I like how you'd got the cars to be behind/infront of each other as appropriate to their location in the theoretical depth field

Well done!

ouandyoi responds:

Thanks. :)
i never use the hitTest() function. this is all done by nesting several if...else statements.

[pocket bike racing]

GAAAH! Another one!

Yet another game based on that shooter tutorial!
I don't mean to sound harsh, it's just that I've seen about a million of these clones

Well, at least you've got some imagination - with a bit of work this could be a really good game! That shooter tutorial is very limited; learn some more action scripting and build on what you've got!

Don't give up!

jinklin responds:

i know what you mean. ive seen at least 10 of them. 2 of those being mine.

[Tutorial: Masking]

Good tutorial...

...except the sound was too muddy. I recommend boosting the upper mids in it to make it clearer.

ZoloftClock responds:

thanx for the advice mah good man

[Tutorial: Star Wars Saber]

Wicked!

Gotta love anything with 'sabers!

That was cool, cheers man

AntiClockClock responds:

Thx! Love them indeed!