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Score: 6
Land Bomber

"Impressive"

submission: Land Bomber
date: July 7, 2004

Nice engine! I reckon you can really build on this.

Author's Response:

thanx

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Score: 10
F E A R

"stunning"

submission: F E A R
date: July 6, 2004

Absolutely fantastic

My congratulations to you

Really captures the clammy fear of childhood

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Score: 10
chase me

"Absolutely splendid"

submission: chase me
date: July 6, 2004

I think this is the best thing you've ever done - wondefully animated, and a very confident piece.

Bravo!

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Score: 5
monday.

"How sad..."

submission: monday.
date: July 5, 2004

... what a sad film!

It's well made though

Author's Response:

Thanks alot :-)
To tell you the truth, i used to be a bigginer at Flash a few months beck!
But now ive changed, and im better!!!

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Score: 4
Keep Rollin' beta...

"Not bad!"

date: July 4, 2004

Great concept for a game!

I think the black walls should cause a game over - i.e. if you hit a wall that's it. This would be very challenging.

Good work!

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Score: 3
UFOinvasion 3D

"Hmmm..."

submission: UFOinvasion 3D
date: July 3, 2004

I don't want to slate this, but I'm afraid that it's quite badly flawed. The graphics are OK, very well rendered, perhaps lacking a little imagination. The sounds are fine. The engine, however, has been programmed based on a common tutorial with little improvement.

For me, the firing script didn't work. If you pressed fire twice it 'jammed' the gun.

Try something like:

onKeyPress(firebutton) {
if (gun.firing) {
_root.fire();
}
}

Also, the enemy ships had no AI. What I would do is embed each enemy in an "outer" movie clip so all enemies had "onload" code that was caused them to fly at the hero.

I'm sure you can improve on this. You have the basis of a good engine - you need to push it further in my opinion before it stands up in its own right. I hope this helps and doesn't come across as negative critisicm!

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Score: 8
-Zombie Nation- Ep 1.1

"Excellent!"

date: July 3, 2004

Thanks for making this movie - it made me laugh

Can't wait to see the sequel - I hope to see more tributes to zombie films in the background! Especially Zombie Flesh Eaters and City of the Living Dead...

Author's Response:

I havn't seen those films but a quick trip to the video shop could soon sort that. : P

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Score: 7
The Crimeson Scarf

"Good but flawed"

submission: The Crimeson Scarf
date: July 2, 2004

You couldn't jump between carriages and sometimes when I walked off the screen the flash didn't detect it.

Otherwise, a fairly impressive game, very well drawn.

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Score: 9
Metroid Confusion: Part 1

"Excellent!"

date: July 2, 2004

Great animation!

A cameo by Homestar is always welcome!

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Score: 6
Crapcar Racing

"Good work!"

submission: Crapcar Racing
date: July 2, 2004

I'm quite impressed by this

Your scripting is pretty good, I like how you'd got the cars to be behind/infront of each other as appropriate to their location in the theoretical depth field

Well done!

Author's Response:

Thanks. :)
i never use the hitTest() function. this is all done by nesting several if...else statements.

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